User:NatDriesbach/Lesbian erasure/Slf1702 Peer Review

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NatDriesbach - I think my peer is doing a great job with their article and has added a lot of good points as to how lesbians have been underrepresented in society and the media especially. The information is relevant today and serves as a reminder of how we can work towards more equal treatment towards those of different sexual orientations as us.
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