User:Natalia.tosi/Women's police station/Kari.Harper Peer Review

General info
Natali.tosi
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Natalia.tosi/Women's police station
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Women's police station

Evaluate the drafted changes
Article Body:

I think you have a great start on the edits being made for the Wikipedia page! I agree with what you said on your "Evaluate an Article" sandbox- lots of information does need to be added. But what you have written to conclude the results section will be very impactful. It's written very well and provides necessary context. Do you think you will also add more to the body? Otherwise, this is great and definitely relates to the issues we have discussed in class. The information is absoultely relevant and youhave chosen great sources at this stage.