User:Nataliaahmann/Galápagos fur seal/Audrakobus Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nataliaahmann


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
There is a lot of really good information in the article so far. Each section is laid out nicely and all the information reads easily. The article seems a little unbalanced, due to the fact that in some sections there is a lot more information compared to others. Adding information into the smaller sections would help the balance. There is a lot of information in the article already, so it should not be too hard to add more. The article could benefit from an introduction just so the reader knows what the article is going to be about and including some easy information. There are a lot of references which is good. They also seem to be scientific or primary. Adding a section about ecology would also be helpful for the article. Overall the article flows nicely and reads very well.