User:Nataliaahmann/Galápagos fur seal/Cbm018 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Nataliaahmann


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nataliaahmann/Galápagos_fur_seal?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Galápagos fur seal

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think that the author has a great start to the editing of their article. The description and physical appearance section does not show any bias opinions it is straight to the point. There seem to be no opinions or added thoughts of the author present in the article. The author also has a great set up for the topics they want to elaborate on about the species. So far the work is very organized and has a neutral view point with a new source.