User:Natalieschindelheim/Dance therapy/Dgorny3 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Natalieschindelheim


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Dance therapy

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

All the information is relevant to the article topic; however, this draft is vague. There is a great amount of information on what you plan to do, instead of trying the examples you have provided. There are only three cited sentences; therefore, I think it would be beneficial if you added more details about multiple different associations. There is only information on the American Dance Therapy Association and the Association for Dance Movement Psychotherapy; therefore, it may appear bias towards these two organizations. In addition, both links work for the articles, but the sources seem unreliable and biased. The first source is the American Dance Therapy Association website, and the second source is the Association for Dance Movement Psychotherapy. These both come from their official websites that are promoting their organization and cause; therefore, you may want to change your sources to be less biased. This will make your information more credible.