User:Nataliiemacias/Gender dysphoria/Roselyn.cortez Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Natalie Macias


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nataliiemacias/Gender_dysphoria/Roselyn.cortez_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
the leading section of the topic is more on the defending what gender dysphoria is and does not explain what it is as if someone that has no idea what this topic is. It is a get way to clearly state what this topic is but you can use more detail on how this came upon society and such. Your content is up to date but its very short, explain the history of gender dysphasia in more detail and in what ways it used. Add some images if can be found