User:Nataliya.pavlyk/Cholesteryl ester/Tobeornottobe1 Peer Review

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Nataliya.pavlyk
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Cholesteryl ester, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nataliya.pavlyk/Cholesteryl_ester?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template :
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cholesteryl ester

Evaluate the drafted changes
The Lead does include an introductory sentence that clearly describes the article's topic which starts with "Cholesteryl ester, a dietary lipid, is an ester of cholesterol. " The Lead is concise, includes brief description of the article's major sections including: "Transfer of Cholesteryl ester." Lead doesn't present information that isn't included in the articles listed. The content added about the transfer of Cholesteryl ester is relevant to the topic, it talks about how it can transport from HDL to LDL to VLDL with CETP. It also discusses about the increase and decrease of other factors affecting this molecule. The content is indeed up to date as checked by the sources which are peer reviewed secondary sources (both articles). There are no missing content in the Wikipedia article about this topic thus far, however, further update is necessary as advancement in the area increases. The content maintains a professional and neutral tone. There are no biased opinions or statements taking sides. All the content details listed under the section is backed by citation that is accurate and up to date. It includes reliable secondary sources of information which follows Wikipedia's guidelines. The content does accurately reflect what the cited sources say, specifically from abstract and before any findings of any sort. The sources are thorough and reflect what the written details are about. The sources are mostly current, one from 2012 and the other 2010, some newer sources such as from 2018-2024 are preferred however the content within the sources are still up to date with the current knowledge. Every link works except the 6th link from the reference section of article takes back to Hunter College One Search Database. Overall, the content is easy to read and highly comprehensible. The content maintains high standard of grammar and spelling and is broken down into digestible section relevant to the topic's details as noted earlier. The article meet's notability requirements with reliable 2-3 sources. There are 6 sources listed and accurately represent each sentence written. Article does utilize links for other articles so it is more discoverable for words such as LDL and HDL. Overall, the edit was excellent and adds knowledge about the topic.