User:Natanxoza/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Dalip Singh Saund

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
The article is important because Dalip Singh Saund was the first Sikh American congressman in the United States. It is important to dedicate a well-written page about people who promoted and helped the development of pluralism in the United States.

Evaluate the article
The article does not provide enough information about the work of Dalip Singh Saund. His book "Congressman from India" is an autobiography that provides a lot of information about this man, as well as about Sikh community. Furthermore, the article only provides general information about Saund and does not really reflect the ideology this man stood for and which he reflected in his books. The article lacks sources and is underrepresenting what Dalip Singh Saund really meant to Sikh community. There is not enough images in the article - images could be newspaper headlines, or photos from events where Dalip Singh Saund delivered a speech etc.