User:Natasharintoul/Media ownership in Canada/Sambaguhin Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Natasha Rintoul
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Media ownership in Canada

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? my peer had added more sources and added in stats, so this would not need to be reflected in the lead.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? yes, it describes what media ownership is prominent in Canada.
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? Yes
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? No.
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? It is concise.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? yes.
 * Is the content added up-to-date? yes.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? no, there is not.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? Yes, at it is information and sources.
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? No.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? Due to the fact that this article is centered around the CRTC, it is most viewpoints supporting this.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? No, it is strictly informative, no persuasion.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? Yes, there are new sources added with the percentages my peer has added.
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? Yes.
 * Are the sources current? Yes.
 * Check a few links. Do they work? Yes.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? Easy to read.
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? No.
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? Yes.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? No images added.
 * Are images well-captioned? No images.
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations? N/A
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way? N/A

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? Yes, with the added statistics, there is more useful information about media ownership in Canada.
 * What are the strengths of the content added? Numbers are reliable, as well as the sources added.
 * How can the content added be improved?