User:NateLentz/Pan-African Parliament/Gclarke2103 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

NateLentz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:NateLentz/Pan-African_Parliament?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pan-African Parliament

Lead
Your lead section should not have a sub-header, because right now it seems like you don't have a lead section (although the "Pan African Parliament" section is clearly the lead section). The content of this section is great and your first sentence is appropriately concise and informative. If possible it might be good to add a sentence or two just to make this intro a little longer.

Content/Organization
The 'structure' section could use some citations. I'm not sure how much of this is common knowledge but it would probably be good to have some sort of reference for these definitions. I think it was smart to list some information on the current members of each branch of the parliament, and it might be good to mention some of the progress made by previous members in the 'history' section. Additionally, if you're looking to expand this section you could discuss the roles of each member along with the person who currently holds the position.

I think your section on history could probably be expanded, maybe to include predecessors or historical context for the formation of the Pan African Congress. Also, unless the history section all came from the same source I would definitely add more citations to support the claims you are making.

The 'Current Affairs' section might flow a bit better if you listed out a couple of the recent motions or actions taken by the Pan African Parliament, and then you could maybe add a sentence or two about responses to such actions and/or critiques.

Images & Media
I think your article would benefit from adding a couple images.

Overall
I'm not sure which sections (if any) from the original article you are planning to keep, but I think it would be good to include the 'Presidents' table (if it is accurate).