User:Nateleboeuf/In My Father's Kitchen/Joelauria316 Peer Review

General info
I am reviewing Nate and Noa's work on In My Father's Kitchen
 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Link to draft you're reviewing
User:Nateleboeuf/In My Father's Kitchen
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Evaluate the drafted changes
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Looking at the draft created by Nate and Noa, I think they did an excellent job covering the non-profit, In My Father's Kitchen. From the start, I like how they linked relevant keywords within their article to other relevant and informative existing wikipedia articles, such as New York Department of State, Destiny USA, and other words.

I also enjoyed the intro section, which covered the origins of the nonprofit organization with direct quotes from the founder of the non-profit himself. This, in my opinion, was a great usage of a direct quote for a wikipedia page and ensured there was no form of plagiarism in the article. I enjoyed the different sections of the article, which highlighted the different services provided by the In My Father's Kitchen non-profit.

In terms of what can be improved on, I am curious to learn more about the Life House operation run by the non-profit. I noticed that there was another wikipedia page embedded in the article, but a little more information about if if available would be nice. I'd be also curious to know if there are any people who disagree with the work done by the non-profit or any controversies that have arose. If not that is great, but would provide for a more un-biased article experience.