User:Nathan Yu 2023/Yuantouzhu/LisaR2018 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nathan Yu 2023


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Nathan Yu 2023/Yuantouzhu
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Yuantouzhu

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is good, but I feel as if it contains some unnecessary information. For example, the "two gates are open for tourists" could be added into another section, and "seagulls like to follow boats and be fed by tourists" can probably be deleted.

The content contains some unnecessary information. For example, the opening hours and ticket prices do not need to be added to the Wikipedia article.

There are some parts of this article that appear more biased, for example, under local delicacies the portion that says "The white shrimp meat is tender and delicious..." and "visitors can enjoy the local customs..."

The citations appear to contain promotional material, which I am not sure is preferable on Wikipedia.

The sections are well organized and easy to follow.

Overall, you did well on organizing this article and adding more content that was not here in the first place. I would recommend getting rid of the unnecessary parts and changing the wording to be more neutral.