User:Nathan Yu 2023/Yuantouzhu/Peiyu Wan Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nathan Yu 2023


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nathan%20Yu%202023/Yuantouzhu?preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template&veaction=edit


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think the lead of the article Yuantouzhu is very clear and concise in regard to its topic. As an explanation of a tourist attraction, I think the lead is very detailed and accurate. The added content is very relevant to the topic. I see that Nathan adds some major spots for this tour place and provides descriptions for each of them. I think that they are very interesting information. He also adds information about the tourism attraction such as opening hours and ticket price as well as local delicacies, which I think are very helpful information for those who visit the website. The content is neutral and has no biases. Also, I like the image added to the article because it is necessary for a tourist attraction article to let people see what it looks like. Overall, I think the content added is good quality.