User:Nativeteacher/Christians for Socialism/Mparra179 Peer Review

General info
Nativeteacher
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nativeteacher/Christians_for_Socialism?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Christians for Socialism

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, a solid article. I do think the lead should be longer, taking into account the other sections in the article instead of just when it was founded. The information that you added are relevant to the topic as it gives more details about the opposition of this organization. I also liked how you reordered the sections. Talking about the gatherings before the Suppression and Opposition introduces the reader to how the organization worked, and then finding out what problems it faced. Adding the new "Disbanding" section really strengthened the article, because it conveys important information of what caused the organization to disband.