User:Natureab30/Falling Creek Reservoir Ecology/Wiki limno Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Natureab30


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 * User:Natureab30/Falling Creek Reservoir Ecology


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Hi, Lizzy here. Good first draft, both word count and reference targets were hit. You are on the right track with your four body paragraphs being more limnologically focused, but I would maybe deep dive even further into current research there. As you move further into your final draft, you'll want to remove any first person language "I'm going to talk about....etc" and I would look into creating more links to other wikipedia pages, you can do this using the Ctr+K or the link button at the top. For example, if you are writing about Cyanobacteria you can link directly to the wiki article.

Also, in the introduction paragraph you have that the reservoir holds around 322 ml of water...I'm assuming this is megaliters? I think the proper abbreviation would be ML even better might just be to write out megaliters.