User:Natwo001/Nitrogen Fixation/Ruite006 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Natwo001


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Natwo001/Nitrogen Fixation
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nitrogen fixation

Evaluate the drafted changes
Of course, the peer review assignment is pretty early in the class, so it makes sense that there's not a lot to review yet. I liked the sentence and source you added to the article--it adds to the discussion of biological nitrogen fixation, which is one of the major sources.I think your next step should definitely be to continue compiling sources to draw from. While online sources are great, I've found that a really good textbook or two on the topic can provide a ton of information and point you in the right direction. Some will even cite sources within the textbook that you can then look up and continue to draw from. I think there's quite a bit that you could do with the body of the article, as some of the sections seem pretty sparse (e.g. the Frank-Caro process). You could also rearrange the sections, as there is not clear section discussing the chemistry of nitrogen fixation. It's all kind of spread around between the various sections.