User:Navak32/Delia Owens/AhsokaTano532 Peer Review

Lead


 * It looks like there is no changes that you have made or plan to make to the Lead of this article which I think is fine. The lead to this article although short gives a lot of good information that is prefect to then lead into the biography which is the majority of the content in this article

Content


 * Since your draft section of the Wikipedia part is not fully up to date from what I saw. I am not entirely sure what you added to this article However from the quick note that I saw on the edit history page on the article itself it does seem like what you added is relevant and is backed up by good sources.
 * one small suggestion that I would possibly add to this article that I think would be actually really nice is a actual picture of Delia herself. I always find it a lot more interesting to read about peoples life's when I know what they actually look like.

Tone and Balance


 * Again from what I believe that you have added or plan to add everything looks like it is coming from a neutral voice, as wells as disregarding any bias towards a specific subject
 * The section about the murders is very well written, sometimes when writing on topics such as death and possible murders it can be really hard to not show what side you are on.

Sources and References


 * From the whole list of sources on this page they all seem to be very reliable, the only one that made me raise an eyebrow was the article that was linked that was written by Vanity fair. I think there is probably a lot of mix feelings about rather this establishment is considered reliable or not. Again though every other source looked really good.
 * Not to mention that from all the different links that I tried they all worked which is a really good thing
 * all the sources look up to date and there is a wide variety of sources as well

Overview


 * Overall This article as it is already is very well put together and gives an unbiased explanation of Delia Owens and her various pieces of work.
 * I am excited to see what more you have to offer for this article, and I have no doubts you will do an amazing job

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Navak32


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Navak32/Delia_Owens?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Delia Owens

Evaluate the drafted changes
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