User:Navar2mr/Igala people/Rocko Lunchbox Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Navar2mr


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Navar2mr/Igala_people&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template&veaction=edit&redirect=no
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Igala people

Evaluate the drafted changes
So I'm just gunna say off the bat that your article is really super good and I probably wont have much criticism or advice to give because I genuinly can't find much of anything that needs to change. I can see you've been really busy verifying preexisting information and I think that it was a really good idea to cross out information you've verified to be untrustworthy I think I'm gunna start doing that in my article too. On top of that you have a great deal of content here, with well worded information on geography religion and art. Even your lead section perfectly summarizes the information you've added so far.

The only real critique I can give is just a reminder to cite your information with the page numbers next to the little number in the article itself.

Besides that I can really only offer some ideas on how to progress your article from here (which you can ignore if you already have plans) So I can see this going two ways. You seem to have a good amount of general information so for the rest of your time you could focus more on different aspects of art besides masquerades, if you can find material about it. Or second option, you can focus on replacing the sections that are being removed with accurate information in those subjects. But either way it's up to you.