User:Navaz33/Pinkwashing (breast cancer)/Izzbellv Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Navaz33


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Navaz33/Pinkwashing_%28breast_cancer%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pinkwashing (breast cancer)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead: Really good short and simple lead.

content: Adding the origin of the pink ribbon was a great addition to the article.

sources and references: The link works and leads us right to the site.