User:Navy Malinois/Surgical suture/Amahaja1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Navy Malinois


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Navy Malinois/Surgical suture
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Surgical suture

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

- lead reflects new content added by Navy Malinois

- introductory sentence is strong and concise - reflects contents of the article

- lead reflects some of the contents of the article (materials) however could add a sentence or two regarding techniques and history

- lead includes information that is present in the article

- lead is concise and conveys the contents of the article

Content:

- Content added is relevant to topic and is up-to-date

Tone and Balance:

-Content added is neutral and unbiased

- Does not contain viewpoints that are over or under represented

Sources and References

- Content is supported by reliable sources of information coming from scientific journals/databases, pharmaceutical websites, and medical texts

- Sources are generally current - couple of sources from late 1900's (may want to check on those)

- Sources are diverse

- Links working

- Seems like draft in sandbox needs additional citations to be added later

Organization

- Content is well organized and the article is easily readable

- no spelling or grammar errors encountered

Images and media

- no images or media added by Navy Malinois

Overall impression

- Navy Malinois has cleaned up the lead paragraph in their sandbox and it is clear and concise

- Expanded upon materials section

Hello!

I think your proposed changes to the article in your sandbox look really good. I think adding to and cleaning up the materials section will be of benefit to the article. It looks like there are still citation and resources that still needed to be added. My advice would be to include or sentence or two to the lead section regarding techniques and history to make the lead more complete. Also potentially see if you can add anything to the history of the suture!