User:Naylay10/Lake Turkana/Jramo059 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Naylay10


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Naylay10/Lake Turkana


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lake Turkana

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Nothing has been added to my peers sandbox as of May 16, 2022.

However, the article does look very interesting and could have a bit added to it. There is a section focusing on anthropology for lake Turkana. I think my peer could focus on this section in adding any new anthropological findings regarding this area. Maybe things like what happened in the transportation of the hominid species found in this area and what they did to preserve the bodies.