User:Nazsultana/Women in India/Laura21hg Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nazsultana


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Nazsultana/Women in India
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Women in India

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead has not been adapted because the changes that this student intends to introduce in this Wikipedia article are minor and they do not affect the overall content of the article.

As for the content, it is both up-to-date and relevant for the article in question because it includes statistical data about the female labor force participation rate in India, as well as possible social biases. The topic addresses the situation of women in India so it is considered to be one of Wikipedia's equity gaps regarding underrepresented communities, in this case, women. Moreover, the content was added in a neutral and informative way, without a clear bias on a particular position. The information about women in India was included in a way that did not attempt to persuade the reader of a certain opinion, and instead, it just presented objective evidence about this topic.

Most sources are also up-to-date because they were all published in the last few years, except for the second one (Ganguly-Scrase, Ruchira (2003). "Paradoxes of Globalization, Liberalization, and Gender Equality: The Worldviews of the Lower Middle Class in West Bengal, India". Gender and Society. 17 (4): 544–566. ISSN 0891-2432) which was published 20 years ago. Nevertheless, they all come from reliable and objective authors.

The content is concise, coherent and concrete, as well as free from any spelling or grammatical errors. My general opinion is that this article meets all Wikipedia's required guidelines and it will be a positive and beneficial addition to the article and the Wikipedia community as a whole.