User:Nbernal2020/The Lord of the Rings: The Return of the King/Mbjordahl Peer Review

Peer review for Nbernal2020
I enjoyed looking through the edits you made to the article. You did a really great job with making several grammatical changes, correcting previous errors. You also did a good job making other edits, such as cutting down paragraphs that included unnecessary, wordy information and working on sentence structure to make it a lot easier to read. I noticed that some people reverted some of the changes made because they were using British English, so I would just make sure that if making changes to that, they are all consistent between either American or British English.