User:Nbeyli/Soviet Jews in America/Mbrennan21 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nbeyli


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Nbeyli/Soviet Jews in America


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like the idea of your lead, however, I would recommend not asking rhetorical questions on a Wikipedia page, the content provided should be solely facts that give light to what your article will be about. You also need more sources in your first section. Make sure to cite every sentence. Also, I would create more sections so you can go into more detail about specifics rather than just giving a general overview.