User:Nbnmaria/Lifestyle medicine/PediHeartsAndCaths Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nbnmaria


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Lifestyle medicine
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lifestyle medicine
 * Lifestyle medicine

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: Nbnmaria provided excellent additions to the article page in the lead section. The lead is concise and clearly provides information about the rest of the article. Recommendations for improving the article after the lead would be expanding on the 6 areas for lifestyle medicine focus that is brought up in this section or linking to more information.

Content: The content is this page is fair. There are 3 sections which include Lifestyle Medicine in Practice, Levels of Lifestyle Medicine, and Interprofessional Education/Collaboration in Lifestyle Medicine Practice. The sections contain sentences that are clear and relevant. I find the information to be informative and easy to follow.

Tone: The tone of the page is balanced and well written. Neutral.

Images and media: There are no images at this time. Addition of media would help to improve the appeal of the page.

Overall impression: This article contributed to by Nbnmaria was written very nicely. The additions to the previously written article was easy to understand and I enjoyed learning about lifestyle medicine. The lead provided a strong summary of the various characteristics and sections of the page. Nbnmaria did a great job expanding on 2 of the 3 characteristics which included lifestyle medicine in practice and interprofessional education/ collaboration in lifestyle medicine. They expanded well on talking about various organizations including IBLM, LMGA, and etc. Thank you Nbnmaria for your great contribution to wikipedia.