User:Nby2216/Canine influenza/GardOU Peer Review

General info
Nby2216
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nby2216/Canine_influenza?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Canine influenza

Evaluate the drafted changes
This looks like a well detailed draft. There is an addition to the lead section, which does seem fairly small in the actual article, so this is a good change. The history section is the largest and most detailed so far, thus, it may be a good idea to focus less on History. However, I do think the history contributions drafted are good, and I do see you have done more to contribute beyond just history. The addition of the Transmission section will be helpful to the article, and it, to me, seems well put together. Expanding the vaccine and symptoms sections is a good addition as well. I would suggest ensuring that the information in your draft doesn't too closely match what is already in the existing article, to avoid being too repetitive. All sources seem official and up to date, so well done there. Overall, I think this is a solid draft!