User:Nc1018!/Copper toxicity/Spmg98 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Spmg98)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nc1018!/Copper_toxicity/Spmg98_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Copper toxicity

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Overall, a lot of information is covered in each section going into detail about each topic covering copper as a whole and the toxicity it has on different species. Although you have a lot of information i would cover how Copper toxicity can result from chronic or long-term exposure to high levels of copper through contaminated food and water sources going into details how animals and humans consuming water can be harmful overtime. For the symptoms section you have a good amount covering them, but adding more could give readers a better understanding of how bad this topic can be to us and others. In general tho this is still a better improvement based on how this wikipedia page was before prior to you working on this page.