User:Ncarril4/Lesbian Avengers/Jasminegpaz Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ncarril4


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ncarril4/Lesbian Avengers


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lesbian Avengers

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your bibliography is very well-researched and an overall great collection of resources for your article.

Your edits to the Article lead also did a great job of eliminating language that may have appeared biased (e.g., "lesbians were increasingly tired of working on issues like AIDS and abortion while their own problems went unsolved...lesbians were frustrated with invisibility in society at large); removed unnecessary quotes; remained concise throughout; and added valuable information such as the name of the founding members of the Lesbian Avengers, the fact their their activism was "humorous and untraditional," and other notable accomplishments of the organization.

Great edits!