User:Nch5719/Cahokia/Newty123 Peer Review

General info
Nch5719
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing https://docs.google.com/document/d/1u0qwC12D_io4MYIC4PIRSOIVWtXGNS3rGgwU71vJX2s/edit?usp=sharing
 * Link to existing article
 * Cahokia::
 * Cahokia::

Evaluate the drafted changes
The title is doesn't tell me whether the article is talking about the mounds or the people of Cahokia so some clarification should be added.

The article doesn't mention anything about the lifestyle of the Cahokia people so adding information on that can drastically improve the quality of this article. This can include the political setting, city layout, and social settings regarding this article.

Update outdated sources

It also lacks the up to date theories leading to the decline of Cahokia.

Add infographic to sections that don't have any.

Lastly, finding stronger sources for the parts labeled "[Better Source Needed]"

The outline is very well written and your group has a general idea of how y'all want to rewrite this article and having a list of sources of that can be added be useful when adding to this article.