User:Nch5719/Cahokia/Sagegreen04 Peer Review

General info
(pethomp)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Perri's review is currently not written down and is in a separate brain storming section.
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Cahokia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I wasn't able to find a section 4: Political and Social Organization, however, I do find it interesting about the inclusion of a Ruler subsection. It appears in the draft that there is a possibility of renaming sections and or incorporating these sections to add more information. If not, I think it would be helpful if the wording of the sections can be improved concerning where the categories are located to add more organization into where certain information is located. I think it's a great idea to incorporate Cahokia's relation to maize more in depth, and how the diet plan they were undergoing had a close relation with maize.

The article overall is a very informative article in its self, with the points made by perthomp of possible inclusion of the female aspect of Cahokia and adding more surface information, the article in itself would be greatly improved.