User:Ncrojas13/Folk religion/Lovesarin 7 Peer Review

General info
Ncrojas13
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ncrojas13/Folk_religion/Bibliography?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliography:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Folk religion:

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead:

Your introduction should explain what folk religion is and why it's important.

Content:

You've did a great job covering aspects of folk religion, including its definitions, history, and examples from different cultures. This helps readers understand t better and see how it applies to real-life situations.

Tone and Balance:

The writing is neutral and informative. But, however try to avoiding any bias or attempts to persuade.

Images and Media:

If you include more images because i only seen one. more picture can add value to the article and help readers understand the topic better.

Overall impressions:

Your article has improved the overall quality of the topic by providing comprehensive information and examples. Keep up the good work and continue refining your article to make it even better!