User:Ndayap/Australopithecus anamensis/Shaheenl Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ndayap


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ndayap/Australopithecus_anamensis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Australopithecus anamensis

Evaluate the drafted changes
Starting with content, The addition to the existing article is relevant and adds more to the topic. The draft is written well, it has a clear and neutral tone while also being concise. From what is written, there seems to be no biased opinions within the draft and just states facts found on the topic. The references seem reliable as well as relevant. They are linked properly and seem accessible. There is a issue with some spelling. doing a double check on the terms and how to correctly write them is the only real issue. It meets Wikipedia's notably requirements. I think the content overall gives the article more in terms of information. there can be room for more information added in the future as well as more elaboration. Some more sources could help as well. overall a great draft that just needs more content and spell corrections.