User:Ndayap/Australopithecus anamensis/Tdean005 Peer Review

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Ndayap


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 * User:Ndayap/Australopithecus anamensis


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Hello,

I think you are at a good starting point when describing the physical characteristics of Australopithecus anamensis. I have some questions that could be used to add to your article if it helps:


 * 1) How does Australopithecus anamensis differ in morphology when comparing their ancestry of Ardipithecus ramidus and Australopithecus afarensis? You can add a compare/ contrast analysis on the three species to supplement your article
 * 2) I saw the current article and noticed how the environment section is short. Maybe you can lengthen that section?