User:Ndunka34/Delano grape strike/Emmayoun9 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ndunka34


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ndunka34/Delano_grape_strike?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Delano grape strike

Evaluate the drafted changes
Kayla's article is only in its beginning stage, so she has a baseline for what she's going to write, but it's still preliminary. I think if she makes sure she's not repeating what on the existing Wikipedia article and breaks down and adds more to her existing work, she'll be on the right track. Her information was gathered from reliable sources, and it's all relevant and important, she just needs to keep in mind the fact that there is already an article about her topic. She says she will be focusing on the impact of the grape strike and adding to the section on the Wikipedia page that discusses the aftermath.