User:Ndunka34/Delano grape strike/Erazo2021 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ndunka34


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ndunka34/Delano_grape_strike?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Delano grape strike

Evaluate the drafted changes
The current draft of this article seems to going well in regards to the content. More specifically, all of the content that can be seen in the draft relates to issues within the grape strike union. However, currently the problem I see with this draft is just that it needs some more development. Such as citations within the text in order to credit the sources used, and more sources being used in the references section to show that this topic is important. However, since this draft is still in the early stages I can say that it overall good so far.