User:Ndunka34/Delano grape strike/Js4111 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ndunka34


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ndunka34/Delano_grape_strike?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Delano grape strike

Evaluate the drafted changes
In my opinion the text so far is easy to read and clear. The topic is a good and relevant addition to the original article. The content is good as it is neutral, unbiased, and it is strictly informational. Nothing is over or underrepresented.There aren't any pictures but I don't think it is even possible with this topic so it is understandable. I believe the content is supported with well-cited sources. I know it is still in the making but it looks good so far.