User:Ndurliat/Gaming Chair/Jeffdnguyen921 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ndurliat


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Ndurliat/Gaming Chair


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gaming chair

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead
I think the lead itself does a good job introducing the subject matter itself. Adding the uses was good and I thought was appropriate for the lead. I think for the lead you could find some ways on incorporating some of the sections you might want to talk about.

Content
The content relatively stays on topic and does lead to interesting comparison regarding PC chairs and Gaming chairs. Adding more to the history portion is important and I love the institution of platforms and when the popularity truly boomed.

Tone and Balance
The tone is very neutral so good job there, it does not seem to have an agenda.

Sources and Refrences
I think the sources look pretty good from this angle coming from articles however there does seem to be a duplicated article in there 1 and 6 might be duplicated.

Organization
I think the article itself is concise, it seems hard to find really good information that can make the article long but you have done enough with what you have.

Final notes
Adding images will be the most important thing in the next stages of this project. Adding different manufacturing companies could be an interesting thing to look at. Look to add some hyperlinks to some part to make it linked to something else. Overall great work and start, look forward to seeing more in the future.