User:Neast024/Child neglect/Micahfleming Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Neasto24


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Child neglect


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Child neglect

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article is very in depth and provides a strong information in all sections of it. All the information is relevant and the introduction section is very strong and gives a good starting point. It gives a lot of neutral information and also touches on different types of child neglect and a very in-depth definition of it as well. What was interesting was that it gave links to places that people can if they are in any of these situations. One thing that could be added would be more information about children's responses as it is the smallest section of them all. However, it may be hard to access information about children's responses to neglect so it is not something that is easy to add. There is an ample amount of references and other websites to look deeper into the topic as well.