User:Nectaros/Evaluate an Article

Evaluate an article
This is where you will complete your article evaluation. Please use the template below to evaluate your selected article.


 * Name of article: (Augmented reality)
 * Briefly describe why you have chosen this article to evaluate.
 * I have chosen this article because it was a C-class article and I hope to help improve this article.

Lead

 * Guiding questions


 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
 * Yes
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
 * No
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
 * No
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?
 * It is adequate.

Content

 * Guiding questions


 * Is the article's content relevant to the topic?
 * Yes
 * Is the content up-to-date?
 * Yes
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
 * I think the Possible Applications section could be augmented.
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?
 * Does not seem to fulfill this based on quick perusal of sources and no mention of equity or inclusion in article.

Tone and Balance

 * Guiding questions


 * Is the article neutral?
 * Yes
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * No
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * No
 * Does the article attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?
 * No

Sources and References

 * Guiding questions


 * Are all facts in the article backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
 * Privacy concerns section could use more citations.
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
 * Yes, there are a lot of conference papers on the topic.
 * Are the sources current?
 * Yes, most are within last 4 years.
 * Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
 * Unsure
 * Check a few links. Do they work?
 * Yes

Organization

 * Guiding questions


 * Is the article well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? With the table of contents, it is understandable.
 * Does the article have any grammatical or spelling errors? There is at least one comma that could be added.
 * Is the article well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? I would rename some sections.

Images and Media

 * Guiding questions


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? Most do, at least one is irrelevant or adds nothing.
 * Are images well-captioned? Yes, succinct.
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations? Yes.
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way? No, most are just hanging around sections.

Checking the talk page

 * Guiding questions


 * What kinds of conversations, if any, are going on behind the scenes about how to represent this topic?
 * Some phrasing discussion of statements, little additions to research/citations
 * How is the article rated? Is it a part of any WikiProjects?
 * Start Class article
 * How does the way Wikipedia discusses this topic differ from the way we've talked about it in class?
 * No

Overall impressions

 * Guiding questions


 * What is the article's overall status?
 * Start class
 * What are the article's strengths?
 * Beginning strong compilation of research topics in AR.
 * How can the article be improved?
 * Adding more citations to Privacy concerns and expanding possible applications / past applications.
 * How would you assess the article's completeness - i.e. Is the article well-developed? Is it underdeveloped or poorly developed?
 * It has a lot that can be added, it seems.

Optional activity

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