User:Nehal al-Shamy/Ibrahim Rauza/SherifaOsman Peer Review

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Nehal al-Shamy
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Thanks Nehal for the Article.

The Article is very- well written, the language used can be easily understood by experts and non-experts. The detail of starting with an Etymology section is really interesting and eye opening. Adding the "workers and craftsmen" section connected the dots effortlessly. The Organization is easy to follow. Images are not added yet and for the Tone & Balance, the tone is generally neutral, I would just recommend if there is more information that can be added to the "WaterWorks" section.