User:Nehal al-Shamy/User:Deebdina/Qutbuddin Mosque/Nehal al-Shamy Peer Review

General info
Dina el-Deeb
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Deebdina/Qutbuddin Mosque - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The lead is good in that it corrects a misidentification of the building. It is brief and concise yet, it may benefit from a more general overview of the characteristics of the building.

Content:

The content successfully covers many aspects of the building. Although the building is rather small now, you succeeded in tackling it from different aspects including its transformation in modern times. The article covered the main points of location, history, patron, architecture… etc. You may want to consider separating the story about its shrinking in modern times in a separate section to highlight the event.

Tone and Balance:

The tone is neutral and academic, conforming with the Wikipedia requirements. However, I found the sentence " the mosque is not considered a distinctive building by scholars" rather vague and leaning towards being an overstatement. You may want to consider restructuring it in way that does not underestimate the significance of the building.

Sources and References:

You may want to elaborate more on this section because you used only two sources. Despite their being academic and reliable, you may want to incorporate trusted websites or search in surveys about India.

Organization:

The article is well organized in the different expected sections, which enhances its readability. You may want to add a subheading on its modern history where you elaborate on the story of demolishing parts of it. If historical photos exist, they will elevate this section significantly.

Images and Media:

The images used are not numerous. You may need to add a photo of an overview of the mosque following the lead section.

Overall Impression:

The article was successful in providing relevant information on a rather small building.