User:Nehamakwana/sandbox

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 * Potential New Topic Addition/Extension
 * Although the 'Blackmail' wiki page does have a section on Sextortion/sexual blackmail, it is only about 2 sentences long. A new source might help to better give the readers an understanding of exactly what might count as a form of sexual blackmail outside of just webcam blackmail. That section also includes a direct quote which is usually not allowed on Wiki but also shows that the person who added it might not have fully understood the law enough to put it in lay terms. Thus, we can also go to where he found that information and go through it so that we can take out the direct quotation and put in a better explanation for that topic. In regard to the source for this section, I have found a book called 'Sexual blackmail: a history of modern history' in both the Alexander Library and the Douglass Library.
 * Legalise
 * The wiki includes a large amount of legal text that and technical terms, that although might be linked, would be better to have changed into lay terms. In doing so, we'll most likely have to go through sources cited through those sections and read through them in order to gain a better understanding of what exactly needs to be conveyed to the readers. Because there is such a large amount of legal text, there is also a possibility that there is a large amount of embedding in some parts that will need to be clarified. Just as an added source to help as understand the topic, on the Rutgers Library page I found a reference entry to helps explain what blackmail is. This can also potientally be included in the wiki page as a source of clarification on the definition of blackmail.