User:NehemiahBoreham/sandbox

Content:
Paragraph 1 describes the historical development of Christian Democracy's view of economics from an entirely Catholic point-of-view, while the article's introduction mentions the influence of both Catholic and Protestant thought on the ideology. I would add either the contributions or the path that Protestant "Neo-Calvinism" had on Christian Democratic views of economics.

I would add links to the respective Wikipedia pages of "Rhine-Alpine / Social Capitalism" and "Anglo-American / Enterprise Capitalism" in paragraph 2.

The sentence, "The promotion of Christian Democratic concepts of sphere sovereignty and subsidiarity led to the creation of corporatist welfare states throughout the world that continue to exist to this day," in paragraph 3 is confusing. Having a little understanding of what sphere sovereignty and subsidiarity are, I do not understand how these concepts "led to the creation of corporatist welfare states." More explanation or even creating links to the Wikipedia pages of the two concepts would be helpful.

Copy-editing:

 * Change "became" in last sentence of first paragraph to "came."
 * Add "to" between "led" and "the" in first sentence of second paragraph.
 * Add comma after first mention of "social market economy".

Content:
The only sub-section is titled the 19th Century. I would divide the section further by adding a 20th Century sub-section. While a lot of the information might be accurate in this section it is poorly cited in several paragraphs and could stand to be better organized.

Notes Section
Not sure why this one, long note could not be incorporated into the text of the article.

My Overall Thoughts
This article was labeled a "Start-Level" article, which is one step above the lowest level, "Stub." It was labeled a level 4 (out of 5 levels) vital article, meaning it doesn't figure very high on importance. The "Talk" page had some useful ideas (for instance the "Errors?" section), but a lot of it was pointless argument or old issues. I'm not an expert on the subject but the Bibliography and Further Reading Sections seem solid. I would have to look up Wikipedia's rules for reference formatting, as they all seem to be different and might need fixing.

Article Selection

 * 1) Christian Democracy (See above)
 * 2) Austria in Aftermath of World War II (Expand and add citations)
 * 3) Finland in Aftermath of World War II (Expand and add citations)