User:Neil Givens/Dark Canyon Archaeological Ruins/Markbpaine Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Neil Givens


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Neil%20Givens/Dark_Canyon_Archaeological_Ruins?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Dark Canyon Archaeological Ruins
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Dark Canyon Archaeological Ruins
 * Dark Canyon Archaeological Ruins

Evaluate the drafted changes
As it appears as if the user is creating a new article, I can only evaluate this work on the work that has been posted on their sandbox at the time of this review. Although only one paragraph has been written (in the lead) it has planty of relevant information, remains neutral, and is overall very well-written. I could definitely see this as the opening paragraph of a new wikipedia page.

In regards to the references, a bibliography section is still needed, and some formatting issues still need to be resolved in the References section. However, the references seem of good quality (although perhaps a bit old) and are cited well within the Lead paragraph.

Overall, a good start!