User:Nelischalich/Feminist sex wars/Aroddy1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nelischalich


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Feminist sex wars - student sandbox
 * Link to the current version of the article:
 * Feminist sex wars - live page

Evaluate the drafted changes
Feedback Peer Review for Feminist sex wars by aroddy1:

Overview:

Firstly, wow! What an interesting topic. When I first looked at the title, I can't lie... I definitely did a double take and wounder what this was! LOL :-) I was presently surprised! Its all very interesting, so, good topic pick!

Specifics & Suggestions::

As for my suggestions, I think you're on an awesome start. I would suggest to continue to built out the subtopics that you started, and possibly add more content to other subtopics. I also think that adding a "research" subtopic may also be beneficial, then you could list use some real studies and put down more information on whats been studied academically, or other findings that may affect society... etc. My only other suggestion would be to get some more sources, and utilize that information on the page as well.

Closing:

Overall I think you're off to a good start, and I look forward to seeing the final result! GOOD WORK! :-)