User:Nelischalich/Feminist sex wars/Ehernandez14 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nelischalich


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nelischalich/Feminist_sex_wars?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Feminist sex wars
 * Feminist sex wars

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that the content that you added is well done. I do think it fits in with the rest of the article. I would suggest that you expand on the key events section simply because right now it seems like it is missing something. Other than that I think you have a good draft going on.