User:Nell Curtin/Language exposure for deaf children/Ambenicole Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nell Curtin


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Nell Curtin/Language exposure for deaf children


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Language exposure for deaf children

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article was very well written and informative. I appreciated how impartial the tone remained "Cochlear Implants and Exposure" section. I know this topic is surrounded with a lot of debate and discourse, so I was impressed that the writer was able to state the argument the Deaf people make cochlear implants while still keeping the tone of the article neutral. Overall, I really enjoyed the addition you guys made to the article.