User:Nelson0226/Addictive behavior/DayXavier0 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nelson0226


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Nelson0226/Addictive behavior


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Addictive behavior

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The definition given is clear and the examples given are good, probably the most common addictions out there. There is only two changed things in the article overall, the citation for the first can be a little more flushed out maybe. The content to be improved could be the citations, the source material of the citations themselves is current and the other content added is strong. More content and more citations could help if there is room for them. But seeing as it is clear and there are good examples it may not be necessary.