User:Nemerson4970/No Child Left Behind Act/Abro2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?(provide username)
 * Nemerson4970
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * No Child Left Behind Act


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * No Child Left Behind Act

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like that you created an article evaluation. This help you a lot while editing your wikipedia page because you can look back at what you originally wanted to change and the references you wanted to add. Before you started adding to the wikipedia page, there was barely any content. You are doing a good job adding to the page. For example, the legislative history paragraph had about two sentences and now it has 6 sentences. There is a lot of content that you added but the only thing I would add is bullet points to the groups of supporters/opponents paragraph.