User:Nemerson4970/No Child Left Behind Act/Deasiacohen Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nemerson4970


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nemerson4970/No_Child_Left_Behind_Act?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * No Child Left Behind Act

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

For the law that you chose to have such a expansive amount of information, you did a great job at identifying what is important and needed to be added to the article. Adding the major provisions and titles to the article was a good choice, it clearly shows what the bill is addressing and how. Even though this is a well known bill, many don't know exactly what it entails. I also liked that you added who supported/opposed the bill, there is such controversy around this piece of legislation today and its a nice tidbit of information. Overall I feel that the article and the edits have a neutral tone and the edits made in the sandbox strengthens the wiki article greatly.